Add patterns 30-34: forced metaphors/figurative overwriting, dramatic fragmentation and punchy kickers, rhetorical questions answered immediately, sentence-opener tics, and reassurance kickers. These cover structural/rhythm tells the existing 29 patterns miss (short subjectless dramatic fragments, cutesy aphorisms, rhetorical Q-and-A).
Add a 'marketing and blog cliches' list to pattern 7 for the business/LinkedIn register (game-changer, circle back, deep dive, moving forward, ...) that the Wikipedia-derived vocabulary list does not catch.
Edit the skill's own instructional prose to follow its own guidance: remove em dashes and negative parallelism from the narration so the skill models the writing it asks for. Before/After examples are left intact so the demonstrations still show the tells.
Update the pattern count (29 -> 34) and the attribution note to mark 30-34 and the pattern-7 additions as Hermes additions beyond the blader/humanizer source.
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